#88 Jack and Jillean

3rd Sep 2017, 1:59 PM

#88 Jack and Jillean
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Travis on 3rd Sep 2017, 1:59 PM

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Don't worry folks, we're not chasing down another treasure map in this story. Jack's had enough fun for one night. Plus this story has run twice as long as the other two. Was that ok? good? Bad? I'm still getting the hang of telling a story in comic form.



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Chippewa Ghost on 3rd Sep 2017, 6:46 PM

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Tha last panel's dialogue is downright harmful--gave me the lulz.

Keep pushing these out, man.

Travis on 3rd Sep 2017, 7:04 PM

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Thank you! I was pretty pleased with myself when I wrote it. The Jack adventure has been fun and hopefully a good time for all, but I'm ready to get back to Bruno pretty soon here.

Cooke on 3rd Sep 2017, 7:43 PM

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Haha, this page is great. Really like the dialogue. Ol' Bob just got a taste of a knuckle sandwich!

MadJak91 on 4th Sep 2017, 8:14 PM

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If something is written about the treasure on the bottle(s) then that is like those promotional competitions on Coca Cola bottles, haha. That would be pretty clever of the pirates though.

Travis on 5th Sep 2017, 2:33 AM

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hmm, The maps in the bottle. Maybe I could have drawn that more clearly. But It would definitely be the first prize inside deal ever.. I think.

MadJak91 on 8th Sep 2017, 8:17 PM

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Ah! I see it now! For some reason it looked to me like it is paper on the bottle. Huh. Eyes play tricks.

steveha on 6th Sep 2017, 4:35 AM

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I'd say go with your gut on story length. I like this comic already, so whatever you are doing is working.

Keep up the good work!

P.S. I'd be happy if you could give us a few comics with Mae. I like her.

Travis on 6th Sep 2017, 10:02 AM

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Thanks for that. I do plan on doing some Mae centric stories at some point. This one with jack ended up running like.. a year or more.. so it's been a slow process.

IllustratorMan on 8th Sep 2017, 5:36 AM

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Gagged a little drinking on my soda while reading that last panel.
hilarious

Travis on 8th Sep 2017, 12:17 PM

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Awesomee:)

AmeliaP on 10th Sep 2017, 8:17 PM

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Hahaha, best punch pun I've heard

There is a bubble head Bruno as incentive in Topwebcomics. So cute!

Travis on 11th Sep 2017, 10:27 AM

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Thank you :) I did that Chibi Bruno for a promotional Flier. He's really great.
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